The Sundering (preview)

**note: This is my first attempt at rp, so sorry if it fails...epicly.

Prologue:

"Smoke from the buildings had died down now, as had the screams of the dieing.High above two men looked down upon the small village of Tuzal, or what was left of it. It had come, and burned it to the ground... The younger one looked at the other
"Father, it is as the prophecy has foretold, now is the time, it has been written."
"I know my son, I know... I just wish I had gotten a chance to warn them..."
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Elsewhere...

The night was quite, then again, nothing ever made noise without reason here, thought Jax, they would die in this harsh unforgiving landscape, this hell. He thought about his girlfriend, his love, back home, she had begged him not to come out here, but he had been caught up in the officer's speeches, gold meant nothing, but thoughts of glory swept through him like fine wine.
Suddenly, he turned to his left, thinking he had seen something "Caz," he said hesitantly. No response was forthcoming so he ventured over, he looked around the fire, and gagged. There was Caz, on the ground in many different pieces. Suddenly he felt a pain in his back, and everything went black...

Slowly, she worked her way through the camp, killing all, drawing here blade across throats, slowly, gently, lovingly... She sniffed, and looked up, her bloody work done. How pretty she thought, I used to dream of things like that, but now i want more... SO MUCH MORE! NEVER WILL THEY MOCK ME AGAIN!....
Her work done, she slowly walked away, suddenly she stopped, and turned around uttering a bone chilling chuckle "No one gets away from Kiera.... no one."/////////////////////////////////
Meanwhile up in the cold mountains of the Shiverpeaks...

Sniff... Shuffle... "Get away from me!"..... "NOOOOOO!" Mighty loved this time... the final terror filled moments of life... He loved staring into their eyes until the last vestige, the last dread filled dreg of light fled.
Suddenly he turned and stared down into the valley, and saw the men and women working there, laughing merrily, they had cast him out! Him! The mighty paragon, so what if he had becomed embroiled with that Necromancer, well no one would laugh now, no one would spit on him, he looked around
"I WILL TAKE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!" He screamed.


Tell me what u think, maybe ill write more
Comments Critiques are awesome ^^

Everyone has a writer within them in my opinion ... I'm sure it'll be great Jid just remember what I told you about planning if your not sure until you get a real feel for it

Another story! I can't wait .... even though I'm still not through all the ones already posted lol

well i havent even written it yet. lol

oooh shiny new story.....*get on with it....(monty python quote)

there is 1 problem with this story...its to short......i want more... aaaaaargh

lol *spirits rise*

Nice! Considering its your intro it leaves the reader wanting to know "What the hell happens next?!?"

Love the way your making the beloved good guys of the alliance into evil bad guys ... please keep it coming.

And like Force said ... too short! lol

15/5!!! Awesome. I love the evil Mighty and Kiera.

Dark, Demonic, Cruel, Vicious. Wonderfull descriptions of the gothic side of mass murdering!!! Are they all part of some strange assassins guild or are they all like minded individuals bent on revenge? I want more!!! Very awesome! Keep at it. That sounds like it could become a wonderfully awesome story!